Shelling Peas: 7 Ways of Looking (a Poetry Sisters post)

There’s a marvelous poem by Wallace Stevens called “Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird”, which you can read here. And so it came to pass (in January of this year), that my poetry sisters and I decided to write a poem with different ways of looking at a (noun of choice). Only thirteen is a lot of ways, so we went with seven.

Due to a recent eyeball issue (“an acute hemorrhagic posterior vitreous detachment”) which leaves me with a weird veil in the vision of my left eye, I AM CHEATING and sharing a poem I wrote years ago, which appears in my chapbook The Universe Comes Knocking (signed copies available here).

1

Shelling peas after a day at the farmer's market, I am transported

to one of three mismatched chairs at the formica dinette table

in my grandmother's postage-stamp kitchen,

trying to keep pace with her, my small efforts no match

for the experience in her old hands.


2

I pop the stem of a pea pod back,

pull the string down the outside curve,

unzipping a jacket, only to find

a row of fat green pearl buttons inside.


3

Pea pods are the oysters of the garden –

inside some pods, a string of perfect pearls

in others, disappointment.


4

Pulling a string along the inside curve of a pea pod,

I create Thumbelina's canoe.


5

On first opening the outside curve of a pod,

I spy one row – a steady green caterpillar;

opening further, the hinge unclasps:

every other pea held to opposite sides

of this green womb by a tiny umbilicus.


6

Unzipping pods to strip reveal their insides,

I think about Charles Darwin:

Here three are fat and one is left unformed;

there, seven peas crowd so tightly their sides are flat,

blocks in a row that do not wish to separate.

Opening the last one, peas burst out;

avoiding my bowl, my hands,

they scatter four feet away on the floor.

The cat lies in wait to strike them.

7

I feel that I should write thank-you note

To the compost-bound empty husks:

Dear mother pods,

You have given me your children.

I had to pry them loose from the slight green cords

that bound them to you, through which

you gave them life and nurtured them.

Your job now over, I consign you to the compost heap.

Please know that before you can decay,

I will have eaten your children

dressed only with butter, salt and some pepper.


Read my sisters’ poems here:

Liz

Laura

Tanita

Tricia

Sara

Mary Lee

This week’s Poetry Friday roundup is hosted by Irene Latham at Live Your Poem.